I created these two images to illustrate a point about punctuation in a future article for
AzarGrammar.com, the website I manage at work. I generally don't like to work from photos, but Dan refused both to eat or to be eaten by a crocodile in the interest of creating authentic sketches from life. So I had to resort to photo references for these.
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Man eating crocodile |
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Man-eating crocodile |
Richard Firsten is the author of the article and asked me to do the illustrations. These are his words from the article regarding the importance of the hyphen:
Punctuation marks were created to aid readers, to make
phrasing clearer and more easily recognizable for readers. Here’s a case in
point. If I write here Man Eating
Crocodile, which picture reflects what I’ve written?
In actuality, it’s the picture on top that depicts
what I’ve written, but a show entitled Dangerous
Encounters on the cable network NatGeoWild (National Geographic Wild) used
that title for one of its episodes. Of course they should have written Man-Eating Crocodile. That hyphen shows readers
that man and eating are being used together as a single adjective to describe a ferocious
crocodile. The hyphen helps readers to understand that and phrase it properly
in their minds. In fact, the rules of prosody in English dictate a change in
how these words should even be spoken if the hyphen is present or absent. (I’m
going to use capital letters and bold face to show which words or parts of
words receive more or less equal stress in the flow of speech):
man
eating crocodile = MAN EATing CROCodile
man-eating
crocodile = MAN eating CROCodile